That crying boat tips slowly.
A terrifying wave tilting funnily.
One gloom lifeboat listing scarily.
The frightened boat lay quietly.
An omens sky toppled painfully.
Friday, 27 September 2019
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Good but next time make the picture smaller.
ReplyDeleteYour lines are unique. Don't get off task with Cameron.
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